I sit here, trapped on this curséd island,
Forbidden to die, unable to dream
Of a day when my misery might end.
Those times when the callous, spiteful Gods deem
It appropriate to send me a friend;
A companion, or perhaps a lover…
Times that make it seem like my pain might end…
But with Gods so cruel, why do I even bother?
It’s a game to keep me in discontent,
Hateful fun to keep me isolated,
To have me wish that eternity might end.
Ages I’ve hoped, and ages I’ve waited,
But it seems as if the Fates are content,
To leave me prisoner in paradise.
Writing for school is so hard o_O The rules! The limits! It's like they try to shut out all imagination! -_-
Well, you certainly worked out the the fixed stanza trap much better than Calypso worked out the stuck on an island thing!
Nothing loose, nothing forced...very decent, and uninterrupted, just like a bitter rant! Fancy the alliteration in that couplet, too.