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I sit here, trapped on this curséd island,
Forbidden to die, unable to dream
Of a day when my misery might end.
Those times when the callous, spiteful Gods deem

It appropriate to send me a friend;
A companion, or perhaps a lover…
Times that make it seem like my pain might end…
But with Gods so cruel, why do I even bother?

It’s a game to keep me in discontent,
Hateful fun to keep me isolated,
To have me wish that eternity might end.
Ages I’ve hoped, and ages I’ve waited,

But it seems as if the Fates are content,
To leave me prisoner in paradise.
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You guys have NO idea how hard it is to write for school. You are trapped, and restricted in your writing, forced to use fixed stanzas and rhymes and...

Anyways, this is written from the point of view of Calypso. If you know who she is, great! If you don't, go read a book.
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~Kailani-e Jan 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Calypso :D The goddess confined to her island in which Odysseus stumbles/washes up on her island and is stuck there for seven years D; She's like a crazy fisherman. xD

Writing for school is so hard o_O The rules! The limits! It's like they try to shut out all imagination! -_-
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~TheAmericanRealist Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Actually, Odysseus never really ASKS Calypso to leave. He just 'assumes' that he is stranded. I mean if later on, he is able to just make a boat, he would have been able to do that LONG ago.
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~Kailani-e Feb 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
XD I must assume he also "enjoys" Calypso anyways, to the point he doesn't ask. You're right, he should've just grabbed a tree and drifted out there!
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~TheAmericanRealist Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
Ody. is a jerk, though not many people like to admit it. They like to think the story must have a perfect hero.
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~Kailani-e Feb 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
("Ody" xD). The story is so famous that people think that he is the model of a "perfect hero". Ugh.
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~TheAmericanRealist Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
Some people are so lifeless....
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Yay, Calypso! I've always felt so many sads for her...
Well, you certainly worked out the the fixed stanza trap much better than Calypso worked out the stuck on an island thing!
Nothing loose, nothing forced...very decent, and uninterrupted, just like a bitter rant! Fancy the alliteration in that couplet, too.
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~TheAmericanRealist Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Oh how I love her plight. Forever alone, forced to go through life without love...
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Mood: Love !Piwakawaka-42 Jan 11, 2013  Student General Artist
This needs to be turned into a metal song. :headbang:
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